Brown Eyed Girl

Heya just me! I do like it, u were lying!! hehe Good idea and you could do a lot with an opening like that. Only thing I have to say, ...

Hey, I'm returning the favour of a review and I'm gunna ad you as a friend because you can never have too many friends! Your poem is lovely and I ...

Random poem! I hope you understand because it's quite personal and I hope people might feel the smae sometimes. Tell me what you think thank you xx Love and hate. ...

Hey again! Emotionally stunning! You're really deep, you should be writing romance novels! You should read that at their wedding I'm sure they'd love it. Amazing done Brown Eyed Girl ...

Hey, Amazing job. It felt like you were talking to me personally, it felt so naturally written. Beautifully done. No mistakes as I can see but I'm not really a ...

Hey. WOW! You have captured what I could only wish to capture in a poem. My favourite bit was how you mentioned you say you love someone out of habit ...

Hey, Very memorable poem nice rhythm and idea. Superb poem Brown Eyed Girl xx

Hey, Cool poem. simplicity makes it so ... perfect! So short and sweet, I think it would be a nice way poem to open a book with, first page. Think ...

Hey, Great poem! I can't believe no one has commented on it, I've read them all and I like them all but this is my fav. It reminds me of ...

Sorry just reading through notice meant to say meaningless and thanks for everyones comments trying hard to keep improve on my poems Peace to all my fellow writers :lol: Brown ...

I’m crying on my own right now. I don’t really have a reason. Apart from I’m tired of pretending, and trying to please them. People insult me and I’m trying ...

Hi, I liked your poem it made me think which is a good thing! Very serious for your first piece but that's good for me. I'll warn you as a ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! :lol: I'm kinda new to this stuff so I'm not gunna be heavily critical because I'm too nice!! lol Sooooo I really like your piece it's ...

I use to love this guy, With a great smile and blue eyes. He was my best friend for a while, He had personality, maturity and style. He use to ...

hey, Well i liked it, the rhyme i thought was clever and I imagine very hard to do. The pace I loved, i could feel it becoming more and more ...